SOME KIND OF WONDERFUL by Dahlia Rose

Description: Soon-to-be single mother, Bonnie Gabrielle, is just about to pop, when a sexy Special Forces soldier, Conrad Lewis, literally lands in her front yard. When they get stuck together weathering a hurricane, they end up creating a quiet storm of their own.

The Good: I would have loved to have read this short-but-sweet story when I was pregnant. The concept is great, and there’s nothing sexier than a man that knows how to handle in the bedroom and in the nursery. What a great hero.

The Bad: See the Editing issues section. Also, the premise was good enough for a longer story, and the characters deserved more development. As a short it felt rushed and underdeveloped.

The Naughty: Steamy sex, explicit language.

Editing issues: Lots of grammatical errors.

Publisher: Dahlia Rose Unscripted

Length: Short

Final Grade: C+

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