The Good: This is a good situation. And the sex is hot.
The Bad: Almost the entire story is told and not shown. I’m still not sure if Olivia is black or white — the Amazon tags say bwwm, but she’s not described in physical terms outside of the two leads desire. The story has somewhat good bones, but ultimately fails due to really poor execution.
The Naughty: Erotic. Menage.
Editing issues: 2 typos
Publisher: Capri Montgomery Books (Indie author)
Length: 7,000+ words
Final Grade: D+
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