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THEY SAY LOVE IS BLIND by Pepper Pace

December 13, 2012 in B Reviews, Book Reviews, self-published, steamy

Description: When plus-sized Tory meets blind Floresian hottie, Lee, on the bus, she has no idea that she’s in for the romance of a lifetime.

The Good: Ms. Pace has created yet another compelling couple in Lee and Tory. Loved the details of Lee’s day-to-day life as a blind man, and especially loved learning about Flores, an island country I had never heard of before reading this book. I appreciated that they were both insecure about things the other didn’t mind, size for Tory, sight for Lee. Lee is an excellent hero, and his big family really makes this lovable story shine.

The Bad: The main characters fall in love very quickly, which rings false, considering how insecure they are. Also, the story treads water for a bit in the middle.

The Naughty: Steamy. Lots of sex scenes.

Editing issues: A few typos. A couple instances of head-hopping.

Publisher: Indie

Length: 202 pages

Final Grade: B+

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CARNAL KNOWLEDGE by Celeste Anwar

December 11, 2012 in black woman white man, Book Reviews, bwwm, bwwm romance, paranormal, self-published, shifter(s), steamy, vampire, werewolf

Description: When sassy Kaeli collides with Cajun Lycan, Navarre Lyssandro, it’s chemistry at first sight. If they can survive the vampires who are out to get Navarre, they just might make it work.

The Good: Really good action scenes. Kaeli was very sassy and Navarre was very sexy with clever claws that extended (kind of like Wolverine’s). Also, gotta love a Cajun accent.

The Bad: Though I liked the characters, there was no time to get to know or care about them. And though the story has really good bones, it was clumsily executed. It felt like getting an outline as opposed to a fully fleshed out short. Also, see the Editing section.

The Naughty: Steamy. Explicit language.

Editing issues: Weird indents in places. Incorrect capitalization in places. Lots of syntax errors.

Publisher: Indie Author

Length: Short (less than 1000 locations on Kindle)

Final Grade: C

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BABY GIRL AND THE MEAN BOSS by Pepper Pace

December 6, 2012 in A Reviews, black woman white man, Book Reviews, boss, bwwm, bwwm romance, co-workers, self-published, steamy

Description: Nicole–Baby Girl to her co-workers, even though she’s not that young–barely manages to put up with her grumpy boss, Marty. That is, until she gets into a terrible car accident and he unexpectedly comes through. Could this be a case of mistaken intentions, or is Nicole’s mean boss the perfect guy for her?

The Good: This book is a highly romantic read, with one of my favorite tropes, damaged people–in this case literally and figuratively–finding healing in each other. I love that the heroine and the hero get to see each other at their worst, and Ms. Pace does a great job of illuminating the vulnerable people under their hard shells. There’s also a nice emotional mystery running through the story. You’ll be dying to know what’s made these two people the way they are. The answers are very satisfying, as isthe epilogue. BABY GIRL AND THE MEAN BOSS is well worth its small price.

The Bad: See editing.

The Naughty: Steamy. Lots of sexual tension. Masturbation.

Editing issues: Several typos. Adverb abuse.

Publisher: Indie Author

Length: 132 pages

Final Grade: A-

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WORTH THE PRICE (Hart’s Fall, Montana) by Delilah Hunt

October 10, 2012 in B Reviews, black woman white man, Book Reviews, bwwm, bwwm romance, married couple, rancher, self-published, steamy

Description: With her father facing possible bankruptcy, Danika turns to his worst enemy, Brandon Sharpe, for help. Brandon agrees to help her, but under one condition. She must become his wife!

The Good: I love, love, love, blackmail marriage stories, and I love Ms. Hunt’s writing, so this was a good combination for me. I’m also a sucker for a hero who isn’t traditionally handsome. Brandon is not only tortured and vulnerable, he also has both emotional and physical scars. Sexy! Sexy! Also, there’s a very intriguing B story with Danika’s best friend that will definitely bring me back for the next installment of the Hart’s Fall, Montana series.

The Bad: The story starts off strong, but falters when Ms. Hunt runs into a rather tricky bit of writer’s physics. Basically the heroine leaves, comes back, leaves, comes back, then leaves some more. This creates a yo-yo effect that not only diminishes the overall romance but makes the reader care less about Danika. It begins to feels as if she’s torturing the already tortured hero and makes the resolution less satisfying than it could have been. Leaving, like tears, is writing dynamite. If a character is going to leave, she should do so twice, maybe three times, tops, or else she risks alienating the reader.

The Naughty: Steamy. I hereby declare Ms. Hunt queen of the written blow job as hers are always very sexy.

Editing issues: Weird overuse of the word “tautened.”

Publisher: Swept Away Publishing (Indie)

Length: 169 pages

Final Grade: B- (three stars)

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BRUSH STROKES by Dee Carney

October 2, 2012 in beta male, black woman white man, Book Reviews, bwwm, bwwm romance, self-published, steamy

Description: Tanya, a blocked artist, turns to her hot model, Joe, to help unlock her painting — and perhaps  her heart.

The Good: I really got a kick out of reading about an artist as the main female character, and their first encounter was very hot. There was also an instance of sophisticated juxtaposition, when a literal fire raged as the H/H argued. Love the cover!
The Bad: I was left with a few unanswered questions, most of which concerned Joe, the thinly drawn beta hero, who never did manage to reach three-dimensional status.There were also lots of unnecessary details, which made for chunks of clumsy exposition.

The Naughty: Steamy. Hand job. 

Editing issues: One incident of head hopping. Awkward grammar in places. Weird word choices.

Publisher: Black Dawn Fiction (indie)

Length: 89 pages

Final Grade: C+

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THE ULTIMATE MERGER by Delaney Diamond

September 11, 2012 in A Reviews, black woman hispanic man, Book Reviews, business man, bwlm, Hispanic, Hispanic hero, self-published, sensual, short story

Description: When Brazilian hotelier, Renaldo, and investment banker, Sabrina meet. it’s sizzling chemistry at first sight. But he’s only in the country for a little while. Can they take their relationship from fling status to the ultimate merger?

The Good: Ms. Diamond is a very dynamic, consistent, and immediately engaging writer. She keeps her part in the indie author-reader covenant better than most, and her books are always solidly-structured and cleanly-written — she’s on top of her craft. This story is short, sweet, and as of this writing, totally free. THE ULTIMATE MERGER is a great intro to her longer works.

The Bad: Though I was satisfied with the A-story romance, it felt like the B story with her addict cousin was given short shrift.

The Naughty: Sensual. Seduction. Sex on first meet.

Editing issues: None

Publisher: Indie

Length: 51 pages

Final Grade: A-

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HOT FOR TEACHER by Roslyn Hardy Holcomb

September 6, 2012 in B Reviews, black woman polynesian man, Book Reviews, self-published, steamy

Description: When Caja “a sex ‘em and leave ‘em” sort of woman meets Michael, a ridiculously hot Samoan teacher, she discovers the “leave ‘em” part might not be that easy with this one.

The Good: I loved that Caja was a really different kind of heroine. She’s the one who wants a jump-off. She’s also a former gymnast and has overcome an eating disorder. I loved this take on the romcom staple of uptight woman meets her match in laid back guy. Michael is a very sexy hero (Yay, Polynesian guy with tats!) and more importantly, a very good and level-headed match for Caja. He handles her issues well, and by the end of the book, they just make sense as a couple. I also loved the small Georgia town setting and flavor, the fact that the heroine’s best friend is a lesbian with relationship issues of her own, and this line: “fat-free cheese taste like butt” — because it really does.

The Bad: Michael’s POV pretty much disappears in the second half of the book, making one wonder if it was really needed at all. There’s a big twist in the second half that could have been better set up in the first. Also, the Van Halen song, “Hot for Teacher” is still stuck in my head.

The Naughty: Steamy.

Editing issues: n/a

Publisher: Indie

Length: 114 pages

Final Grade: B+

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THE NAUGHTY SINS OF A SAINT by Tiana Laveen

September 4, 2012 in alpha male, black woman biracial man, Book Reviews, erotic, married couple, paranormal, self-published

Description: When Saint, a dynamic, Egyptian-Asian motivational speaker meets Xenia, a popular radio show host, it’s chemistry at first sight. But can this couple clear a whole bunch of hurdles, including their often clashing strong wills, Saint’s mystical roots, Xenia’s disapproving family, and Saint’s many enemies?

The Dilemma: I’m at a lost as to how to give this novel a proper review, and I don’t even know how I’d figure out how to give it any kind of letter grade. It’s an epic, polarizing book, and it has many qualities that people will either love or hate. For example…

Saint: Saint is a fascinating hero, an engaging speaker who keeps it real and speaks his mind. Even if you don’t agree with what he has to say, you’ll pay attention. And you’re either going to love or hate the many long speeches he has throughout the book.

Xenia: This heroine is hood and crass. You’ll either find her refreshing or dislike her instantly.

Tone: The tone of the book is extremely didactic. Fans of IR blogs that preach against dating black men will love it, others might find is severely preachy and off-putting.

Structure: The structure of this novel is very episodic with an overarching thread. After you’re done, you’ll feel like you’ve watched a whole season of a night time drama.

Length: The book is really long. Readers will either feel like they got their $7.99′s worth, or that it’s going on and on.

The Good: This is a truly unique hero — trust, you have never encountered a character like Saint in an IR romance. I loved that both characters — not just the hero — had sexual histories. The sex scenes are balls to the wall, very intense, with nothing left on the table. They’re also, strangely enough, pretty instructional. So if you’re looking for tips…

The Bad: Craft issues abound: There’s egregious head hopping. Ms. Laveen habitually uses five or more sentences of dialogue to express what could be said in two. Characters often tell each other things they already know, making for really clumsy exposition.

The Naughty: Erotic. Really explicit sex. Really explicit language (ex. “Sit up for a minute and watch me tongue fuck you.”). Period sex. Anal sex. 

Editing issues: Head hopping.

Publisher: Indie

Length: 334 pages

Final Grade: n/a

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ON CALL: AFTERNOON by P.D. Singer

August 13, 2012 in B Reviews, Book Reviews, doctor, gay male romance, self-published, steamy

Description: When Keith, the new single doctor in town, meets sexy black veterinarian, Dante, he’s way to shy to make a first move. Can his cat, Harpo, bring them together?

The Good: I adore vets in real life and wish they’d be used more in romance. Ms. Singer does a good job of making Dante vulnerable (he’s got cat scratch fever), while keeping him attractive in the opening scenes. The romantic build up to sex is sweet and awkward, and the couple is very well-matched. Also, the cat at the center of the story is quite a character. If you love cats, you will love this story.

The Bad: Ms. Singer doesn’t manage to overcome the curse of short stories. The characters are too good for the story length, and many readers will come out of this experience wanting more. Also, if you’re even thinking about adopting a cat, this book might push you over the edge, so leave it alone, if you don’t want to add in new four-legged friends to your family.

The Naughty: Steamy. Intimate medical exam.

Editing issues: None found

Publisher: Rocky Ridge Press (indie)

Length: short story

Final Grade: B+

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AFTER THE KISS by Violet Williams

August 1, 2012 in B Reviews, black woman hispanic man, Book Reviews, bwlm, cop, Hispanic, Hispanic hero, self-published, steamy

Description: When Ebony Rivers meets Demetrius Sorventinos, it’s chemistry at first sight. The only problems are she’s already dating the son of his Russian mob boss, Maxhew Kournikova … and “Demetrius” is really an undercover cop named Tony. Oh dear…

The Good: This is a very high stakes premise with hot sex and edge-of-your-seat situations. Also, the story is told from the first person POVs of Ebony and Tony/Demetrius, and their voices are written with a strong hand. You’re never confused about who’s doing the talking. Overall, the book was a very compelling read.

The Bad: Ebony is very passive and when she does take action it’s often for dubious reasons, with which the reader might not agree. We are given many reasons to cheer for her getting out of her relationship with Maxhew, but in the end, that makes it hard to understand why a smart girl would get into and stay in a relationship with such a an unrepentant thug in the first place. It becomes really hard to root for her continued relationship with Tony/Demetrius, when one suspects that the heroine is being dumb and putting her life at stake for someone she believes to be another thug. Also, there’s a bit where Ebony has an angry memory of one of Maxhew’s friends using the n-word in front of her, which is supposed to insinuate that Maxhew isn’t above racism; but then she laughs when Tony/Demetrius calls her an “Indian giver” a couple of pages later.

The Naughty: Steamy. Masturbation. Cheating. Violence. 

Editing issues: 10 typos found. 2 counts of idiom misuage. 3 counts of word misuage.

Publisher: Quiver Publishing (Indie)

Length: 139 pages.

Final Grade: B-

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Theodora Taylor writes and reviews interracial romance novels in Pittsburgh, PA.

 

 

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