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Theodora Taylor

MERRY CHRISTMAS, BABY by Monica Jackson

December 22, 2011 in B Reviews, black woman jewish man, Book Reviews, bwwm, Christmas, Novella, self-published, sensual

Description: After getting out of a terrible relationship, her mother’s new physical therapist, Nick, might be just the person Sharyn needs to heat up her holidays. But will Nick’s secrets tear them apart?

The Good: Definitely worth the price. This highly romantic novella enjoys strong structure and plotting — plus it’s a really cute and funny story. I especially loved the two main characters’ family members, who were awesomely dysfunctional and somehow perfectly familiar. Reading the character of Betty “The Dragon” Silvers almost made me want to call my own dragon grandma. Almost.

The Bad: The issue with love at first sight is that it can feel like weak character motivation. In this case, Nick goes gaga over Sharyn after one heated glance and then kind of just knows they’re supposed to be together. At times this made it feel like the characters were going along with a plot rather than organically falling in love. Also, though Nick is Jewish, it never really comes up in the relationship. Not only does he go Christmas shopping, and sit through a Jesus-themed prayer, but also at one point he receives a small Christmas tree as a present and doesn’t bat an eye.

The Naughty: Sensual.

Editing issues: Weird formatting: Nick’s POV chapters are done in bold and the action in the instant message chats got italicized a few times. Minor typos (I counted 4).

Publisher: Soul Satisfyin’ Reads

Length: Novella

Final Grade: B-

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SOME KIND OF WONDERFUL by Dahlia Rose

November 9, 2011 in Book Reviews, bwwm, C Reviews, Novella, pregnant, self-published

Description: Soon-to-be single mother, Bonnie Gabrielle, is just about to pop, when a sexy Special Forces soldier, Conrad Lewis, literally lands in her front yard. When they get stuck together weathering a hurricane, they end up creating a quiet storm of their own.

The Good: I would have loved to have read this short-but-sweet story when I was pregnant. The concept is great, and there’s nothing sexier than a man that knows how to handle in the bedroom and in the nursery. What a great hero.

The Bad: See the Editing issues section. Also, the premise was good enough for a longer story, and the characters deserved more development. As a short it felt rushed and underdeveloped.

The Naughty: Steamy sex, explicit language.

Editing issues: Lots of grammatical errors.

Publisher: Dahlia Rose Unscripted

Length: Short

Final Grade: C+

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CANDY GIRL by Eve Vaughn

October 25, 2011 in Book Reviews, bwwm, C Reviews, Novella

Description: Overly nice girl, Julie Bennett discovers that Gabriel Carland, her cold boss, actually runs hot for her.

The Good: It’s always fun to see a pushover finally stand up for herself. And the sex is both playful and hot. Nice girls do!

The Bad: The story feels a bit rushed, especially when it comes to the emotional arc. After the initial seduction, Gabriel Carland isn’t given much to do or any further personal development.

The Naughty: Anal, explicit sex, graphic language, toys.

Editing issues: No

Publisher: Loose Id

Length: Novella

Final Grade: C

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